When you Touched Me -
I could say its been my journey to the eternal world...
When you Hugged Me -
I could feel the embrace of shravan...
When you Kissed Me -
I could forget myself and get merged with you...
When you Left Me -
I could not withstand our separation...
I could say its been my journey to the eternal world...
When you Hugged Me -
I could feel the embrace of shravan...
When you Kissed Me -
I could forget myself and get merged with you...
When you Left Me -
I could not withstand our separation...
7 comments:
Hi Pravallika,
We would appreciate if you can tell us who that "YOU" is, as I want to congratulate him for being so lucky to have you in his life.
Hope you will not disappoint me :)
Sateesh Yanamandra
Hello SKY,
Thank you so much for ur comment. Good to see that u r eager to know as to who that "YOU" is. I would appreciate if you could drop in your email address so that I can mail you the details.
Pravallika
wow
grt
superb
just spersh
feelings
u r tooo gud
Hello Rajaneesh,
Thank you so much for your feedback.
Pravallika
Awesome work ...keep going.....u r realy talented...and u r blessed....
All the best....
Cheers....
UR Fan
Hey Prallavika,
You are, as I think at the moment, surely grooming to be writer....! So my all good wishes to U...
But, to be honest, what all I could only find in ur just-like-that scribbled poem 'Sparsh...' is that it lacks in terms of confidence, freshness, judgment and passion for life....!
Albeit, its indeed a nice venture for budding writers like U....
cheers,
-Prashant
Hello Naveen,
Thank you soo much...
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